Date: 2005-11-17
Site: Sullian
Owner: Sarai
review by: Katrien

The loading didn’t take long, but it didn’t take long for me to the impression that this site looks boring!

Layout: (7/20)

Okay where do I start? I know this is a blog but you seriously needs to put more into your layout. It looks boring and like you haven’t put any effort into it. Actually the only thing I like about it, is that you got two themes. So my suggestion would be, that you tried to make a layout that’s a bit more personal, something that maybe reflects your personality. With this layout you don’t get me interested enough to read your content.

Content: (15/20)

I wouldn’t say that the content is bad, but I wouldn’t say that it’s good either. I can’t help wanting to maybe see some examples of your graphic designing (since you mention it a few times), it would defiantly give a little extra to you site.
Also I want some more information about you. What you like, what you don’t like.
The poems and writings, I love them! Very creative and you want to read more.
Maybe you should also add some more to the guest section..

Organisation: (9/10)

Not much to say here.

Errors: (10/10)

No big errors

Coding: (2/5)

I didn’t find any code for Uptown Reviews.

Graphics: (4/10)

No graphics beside the current layout(s) and the past. Nothing too impressive.

Unique: (3/5)

For the writings and poems! Keep it up.

Overall: (5/7)

Well the first impression wasn’t very good but looking through your site everything got a bit better. Just improve your layouts and maybe add a little more content.

Bonus: (1/3)

Will give a bonus for the poems.

Final Score: (58/100)
Percentage: 58%